[July 4th 2017]
Published in Echoes by Two Writers in Lahore in August 1884. A parody of Tennysonr; listed in ORG as No 107.
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This is a long mock-heroic narrative poem in blank verse in the manner of Tennyson's "Idylls of the King" which tell of the legendary King Arthur and his court. Kipling's parody explains, rather irreverently, how a legendary King Stephen took his tailor to task for the sin of greed, in overcharging him for an ill-fitting pair of breeches.
Andrew Rutherford quotes a letter from Kipling to Edith Macdonald in July 1884 'I have.... made an Idyll of the King out of the Rhyme of King Stephen'. He may have happened on the rhyme in Percy's Reliques (1765) or in Shakespeare's "Othello" (1604), in the Head's library at United Services College
BackgroundKing Stephen was a worthy peer,
Kipling left United Services College in July 1882, where he had read widely and written copiously, determined to become a published poet. In October he became Assistant Editor of the Civil and Military Gazette in Lahore. See our notes on "A Vision of India" for an account of his experiences and state of mind at that time.
Kipling and Tennyson
At this time Alfred Lord Tennyson (1809-1892) was the grand old man of English poetry. In 1850 he had become Poet Laureate, and remained so until his death, He had written many enduring works, including "In Memoriam", "The Lady of Shalott", "The Idylls of the King", and "The Charge of the Light Brigade". .
In Something of Myself p. 7 Kipling recalls being pleased while at Southsea, by extracts in a magazine from 'poems by A.Tennyson.' He must also have found many of Tennyson's works in the Head's library at USC. There is a record in ORG (p. 1281) of the fifteen-year old Kipling reading Tennyson's stirring Defence of Lucknow at a meeting of the USC Literary and Debating Society on December 5th 1881.
See also "The Last of the Light Brigade", and "Fastness", one of the splendid array of later parodies in the first series of "The Muse among the Motors" (1904). .
Ann Weygandt (p. 113) comments on "The Cursing of Stephen"
This could be taken for nothing but what it is - a burlesque on the blank-verse tale as found in "The Idylls of the King" and other isolated efforts of Tennyson's. "Godiva" is its immediate progenitor; the five lines of legend are based upon four that prelude it, with a possible hint at the mention of Christmas games in the head-link of the original "Morte d'Arthur"; but no knowledge of "Godiva" is necessary to recognize the putative author's identity. The catching up and repeating of the phrase "worthy peer" (the plot is taken from the nursery rhyme on King Stephen), the heavy alliteration-lines 15 to 20 fairly bristle with b's, the lyric introduced into the text, the cadence and fall of line, all stamp "The Cursing of Stephen" as a parody of Tennyson. It is the best that Kipling has done.
rattle in this context a toy for babies that give a succession of sharp knocking sounds when shaken
peer a word of several meanings, including a member of the nobility or an equal in status, income etc. which is not really suitable for a king as he is paramount in his own country. Possibly used here for 'lordí as the House of Lords in London is sometimes called the House of Peers.
cots in this context 'cottages', (archaic)
mailed here with the stress on the last syllable, wearing a metal gauntlet (glove).
dam a word of several meanings, here a construction to hold back water in a lake or river to form a reservoir. See also line 22.
Damn with this spelling it is a curse. 'Damnation!'
Saul King of Israel consulted the Witch of Endor who summoned the spirit of the Prophet Samuel in the First Book of Samuel, Chapter 28. See Kipling's poem "En-Dor" which advises against spiritualism.
Son of Jesse King David: see 1 Samuel, 16, 23.
sackbut and psaltery An early type of trombone and a stringed instrument similar to a zither.
Perhaps an echo of Samuel 3.15:
Now if ye be ready that at what time ye hear the sound of the cornet, flute, harp, sackbut, psaltery, and dulcimer, and all kinds of musick, ye fall down and worship the image which I have made; well: but if ye worship not, ye shall be cast the same hour into the midst of a burning fiery furnace ...".[line 41]
fosse a long narrow trench, particularly in a fortification.
armed and mailed he is wearing a suit of armour.
silk and samite miniver and lawn various kinds of expensive cloth.
mast in this context the edible seeds produced by forest trees that accumulate on the forest floor - beech, oak etc, which are eaten by wild life and some domestic animals like pigs.
A Devil and a Tailor, fiend and man legend has it that a tailor had a sewing contest with the devil, the tailor used a short thread, the devil a long one; the tailor won.
miniver white fur used for trimming or lining a garment.
samite a rich silk cloth interwoven with gold and silver thread.
gauds cheap showy trinkets
Credit is the thief of time an echo of 'Procrastination is the thief of time' in Night Thoughts, the 10,000 line poem by Edward Young (c. 1683-1765).
churl a mean-spirited and impolite person.
reverence here meaning an inclination of the head and upper body as a form of courteous greeting.
Chine in this context the backbone of an animal.
ninth-part man Another theory is that the saying was the result of a series of puns on "Nine tellers mark a man." In olden times at funerals the church bell was tolled three times for a child, six times for a woman and nine times for a man. Tellers and mark became corrupted into 'tailors' and 'make'
hose and doublet Covering for the legs and lower body and a fitted jacket of 14th to 17th Century, from the German 'hosen'. 'Trousers'.
usury lending money at an exorbitant rate of interest.
cantle the raised part of the rear of a saddle.
selle saddle (French.)
such vile stars as saw thy birth the arrangement of stars and planets at his birth, his 'horoscope' which some believe influence one's life. See Kim, Chapter 2.
Lancelot the most famous of King Arthur's knights, and lover of Queen Guinevere
lown a word of many meanings including 'calm', but in this context a worthless and unpleasant man.
weald A forested area between the North and South Downs in Kent and Sussex in South-East England. A truly beautiful landscape that Kipling loved and later made his home; Bateman's is in the Weald. It figures in much of his prose and verse, particularly in the 'Puck' stories. He would have seen some of the area during his visits to Rottingdean before sailing for India in 1882. In this context' however, it probably stands for 'the world.' Suggestions from readers will welcomed. (Ed.)
longwise etc this is not clear, suggestions will be welcomed.
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