[September 25th 2008]
[Title] a play upon words. An attractive place visited by tourists is sometimes known as a 'beauty-spot', and is often made hideous like the dell in this story as described on page 299. Also, in the eighteenth century, a small black patch was often applied to the face in the belief that it enhanced the beauty of the wearer - unlike the spots and blotches that appeared on the faces of those affected by Gravell’s chemicals.
[Page 289 line 2] Jannockshire an imaginary county coined from jannock, a northern dialect word meaning true, honest, loyal etc. [Eric Partridge, A Dictionary of Historical Slang].
[Page 289 line 4] certain gases he had made poison-gas during the 1914-1918 war.
[Page 289 line 8] a dusky mottled complexion severe lung damage would have made him look cyanosed (blue). Severe liver damage would have made him look jaundiced (yellow). Anaemia would have made him pale. It is not clear what would have made him dusky and mottled.
a pleuritic stitch the pleura are the membranes that cover the outside of the lung and the inside of the chest wall. Inflammation of these membranes causes pleurisy and can cause pain in the side of the chest on breathing.
[Page 290 line 14] increased blood-pressures, which would benefit by country life taking more rest and time off work would ideally help to lower a raised blood-pressure.
[Page 290 line 1] sixty miles from London, into Kent, Sussex or Hampshire, assuming this story, like “They” (Traffics and Discoveries) and “An Habitation Enforced” (Actions and Reactions) is set in Kipling's part of England.
[Page 291 lines 6-8] Justices of the Peace, or the County, District, or Parish Councils judicial or governing functions then usually exercised by 'the gentry', which carried some influence, dignity, and social standing.
[Page 292 line 13] nerves in this context a tendency towards a ‘nervous breakdown’.
[Page 292 line 14] tonic wines wines to which glycerophosphates have been added for their supposed 'tonic' value.
[Page 292 line 20] accommodation-land grazing-land let on short term agreements.
[Page 292 line 28] one-and-threepence an hour - £2·50 for a 40-hour week; not a bad wage for the period. ('one-and-threepence' was one shilling and three old pennies, some seven pence in current decimal currency)
[Page 293 line 1] stricken in years an echo of Genesis, 18,11: '…Abraham and Sarah were old and well stricken in age.'
[Page 293 line 32] Asiatic complexion implying he is of mixed Asiatic and European descent.
[Page 294 line 4] The ‘Alf-Caste (half-caste), of mixed race.
[Page 294 line 6] Nigger an unpleasant term for one of the black peoples – not now used.
[Page 294 line 13] brevet-uncle 'brevet-rank' for an army officer indicated that he was temporarily promoted but still paid in his original rank. 'brevet-uncle' thus implies an acting-uncle, like 'The Infant' (also a Justice of the Peace) in “The Honours of War” (A Diversity of Creatures, page 10 line 25)
[Page 294 line 18] post-war afflictions visible and invisible shell shock, the lasting effects of gas poisoning such as bronchitis and asthma, and the effects of other war wounds, e.g. a soldier who had sustained a head injury might have epilepsy afterwards.
[Page 294 line 21] Arras (Dutch: Atrecht) capital of the Pas-de-Calais Départment of northern France. In the First World War the city was near the front line and a long series of battles was fought nearby.
[Page 295 line 12] glands presumably an endocrine gland (one that secretes a hormone), but he doesn't indicate which one.
[Page 295 line 20] Harry Tate (1872-1940) born Ronald Macdonald Hutchinson, he took his stage name from his one-time employers, Henry Tate & Sons, Sugar Refiners. A Scottish comedian (right), he appeared in music halls and the cinema.
[Page 296 line 7] public paths 'Rights of Way', paths across private land which the public were entitled to use. See “An Habitation Enforced” (Actions and Reactions) page 33, line 28.
[Page 296 line 14] town in this context, London.
[Page 296 line 32] Nancy capital of the Meurthe-et-Moselle Départment of France, with several colleges, including Nationale Supérieure des Industries Chimiques (School of Chemical Engineering). See also “In the Rukh” (Many Inventions), page 201, line 10, which refers to the National School of Forestry, also in Nancy. Kipling had great respect for France and things French.
[Page 296 line 33] bulbous Holland a play on words. The production of tulips and daffodils etc. which grow from bulbs, is an important industry in that country,
[Page 297 line 7 onwards] trees …. overhung the main road The current British law is embodied in the Highways Act of 1980 under which the local authority can serve notice on the occupier to remove the overhanging vegetation within fourteen days of service of the notice; failing such action the authority can carry out the work and recover the reasonable cost from the occupier, as explained in the text. A similar Act would have been in force at the time. In the country, however, boundaries are sometimes unclear and there may be doubt as to where privately-owned land ends and where the highway begins. Kipling had similar trouble with his local council.
[Page 298 line 7] I also live in Arcadia a translation of the Latin inscription on a tomb; Et in Arcadia ego.
[Page 298 line 12] locus standi recognised or official position.
[Page 298 line 18] bleaching out properly his skin was losing the dusky appearance and becoming paler. .
[Page 299 line 10] azaleas flowering shrubs, family Ericaceae, related to the Rhododendron.
[Page 299 line 12] high commanding charabancs early motor-coaches were open to the elements and high off the ground as the bodies were well above the wheels. When the Kiplings were living in Rottingdean (1897-1902) trippers would be brought out from Brighton in charabancs, from which they could peer over the garden wall of the celebrated author. It was the desire for greater privacy that impelled them to seek out Bateman's.
[Page 300 line 2] eruption a skin rash.
[Page 300 line 6] errors of diet an allergic reaction to something that was eaten which is manifested as a skin rash. Colouring agents in foodstuffs sometimes cause skin rashes.
[Page 300 line 7] close the schools the local doctor would have ordered the schools in the district to be closed in the case of an infectious disease such as measles.
[Page 300 line 17] eaten everything in Leviticus and out of it Leviticus, the third Book of Moses in the Old Testament, contains instructions as to diet and behaviour for the Jewish people.
[Page 300 line 11] Shoreditch a Metropolitan Borough until 1965 when it was incorporated in the London Borough of Hackney, just north of the City of London.
panel-doctor a general practitioner looking after the people who were on his 'list' or 'panel'.
[Page 300 line 18] Bermondsey part of the London Borough of Southwark on the South Bank of the Thames,
[Page 300 line 21] summer rash This could be prickly heat or possibly a rash caused by insect or midge bites on skin not normally exposed to open air.
[Page 300 line 23] 'Welsh Mother' the nom-de-plume of the writer of a letter to a newspaper.
[Page 300 line 27] like the Heathen painted like non-Christian people.
[Page 300 line 30] Carlisle, Morecambe Bay… indicating that the epidemic is country-wide.
[Page 301 line 5] laissez-faire French – a policy of non-interference.
[Page 301 line 12] prodigal see the parable of the Prodigal Son in Luke 15, in which the 'prodigal' wanderer is welcomed back by his parents with great rejoicing.
[Page 302 line 29] ten-days' rash the rash lasts ten days.
[Page 302 line 30] not catching not infectious. The rash does not spread from person to person. They have all acquired it from the same source.
[Page 303 line 8] Adler’s Mixture presumably a poison-gas used by the Germans in thr 1914-18 war – information will be appreciated [Eds.]
[Page 303 line 10] mustard gas (Ypertite) was first used by the German Army in September 1917. It is practically odourless and takes several hours to become effective. It can last in the ground for weeks.
[Page 303 line 12] purple-and-white-band big stuff gas-shells were identified by coloured bands.
[Page 303 line 24] Field Officer the rank of major and above.
[Page 304 line 6] gradely a Northern expression meaning excellent. splendid, good etc. – the foreman and his wife are speaking a Yorkshire dialect similar to that used by Learoyd in the Mulvaney stories.
[Page 304 line 14] wash-house see “The Woman in His Life” page 67 line 13 earlier in this volume.
[Page 304 line 19] dropsy swelling, due to oedema (excess fluid in the tissues). It may have several causes.
[Page 305 line 5] an Englishman’s house, is his castle an echo of a dictum by Sir Edward Coke (1552-1634), one of the great English jurists: 'For a man’s house is his castle.' A principle which Kiplintg would have roundly espoused.
[Page 305 line 16] the gleanings of Mrs. Enoch’s threshing-floor were richer an echo of various Biblical references implying that the amount of corn left over after threshing was finished was more than the whole harvest of others. Mrs. Enoch collected more gossip than Mrs. Saul !
[Page 305 line 27] epidemic an infection affecting large numbers of people or spreading over a wide area.
[Page 306 line 13] forty-eight hours incubation it was forty-eight hours between the time she was in contact with the gas and the appearance of the rash. The incubation period of an illness is the time between acquiring the infection and the onset of symptoms.
[Page 306 line 26] chawal-muggra oil Olem Chaulmoograe, obtained from the seeds of Hydrocarpus Kurzil, was used almost exclusively in the treatment of Leprosy. It would not have been a credible treatment for Measles. For Leprosy it is now largely superseded by other drugs.
[Page 306 line 27] atonic glands Kipling means under-active glands.
[Page 306 line 30] parricide one who murders a parent.
[Page 307 line 20] the Seven Ages of Man
All the world's a stage,[Page 307 line 22] X-ray-proof bulkheads lined with lead to stop the penetration of X-rays.
[Page 308 line 11] corner-men a corner-man in this context sits at the end of the row of minstrels on stage and carries on a humorous dialogue with the principal comedian.
[Page 308 line 28] too scurfy dry, flaky skin
[Page 309 line 32] Jezebel 'And when Jehu was come to Jezreel, Jezebel heard of it and she painted her face; and tired her head (dressed her hair and arranged her head-dress) and looked out of a window. II Kings 9,30.
[Page 311 line 8] the rolling back of the Gates of Golgotha Golgotha was 'the place of a skull' where Jesus was crucified (Matthew 27,33, and John 19,17). There is no mention of any gates in either Gospel, but Kipling’s phrase probably implies something horrible, as Golgotha was also the city’s rubbish-dump.
[Page 311 line 12] “matters arguable to all eternity” A quotation we have not traced; information will be appreciated [Eds.]
[Page 311 line 16] 'that proves it ain't glands..' Major Kniveat went away very fast. With under-active thyroid or adrenal glands he would have moved slowly.
[Page 311 line 28] Pe-wer as a lily an echo of one of the songs of Harry Lauder (Sir Henry McLennan Lauder, 1870-1950, Scottish music-hall entertainer) the chorus of which runs:
I love a lassie, a bonnie bonnie lassie,[Page 312 line 16] he took the bag round the collection-bag carried round the congregation in church for contributions.
[Page 312 line 18] State-aided summer sunlight known by a variety of names but usually called British Summer Time, proposed by William Willett (1856-1915) in 1907 though it did not become law until the year after he died. Clocks are advanced one hour ahead of Greenwich Mean Time in the summer months, a system that has caused great controversy ever since.
The reader may detect a certain slightly acid note here, and in some other observations in this story. Kipling was on the whole sceptical about the merits of state intervention in people's lives.
[Page 313 line 28] fixed or floating it doesn't make any difference to the severity of the hallucination whether they were fixed or floating or what shape or colour they were, or how many he could see. Kit was just trying to make the Major's hallucination seem as bad as possible .
[Page 313 line 30] vermicular worm-like, resembling the track of a worm.
[Page 314 line 2] if the tip trembles the tip of the tongue may tremble in thyrotoxicosis (over-active thyroid gland) and in other conditions where there are involuntary movements.
First published in the programme of a meeting of The National Council of Social Service at the Albert Hall in London on 27 January 1932, in the presence of the then Prince of Wales (later the Duke of Windsor) Set to music by Walford Davies (KJ 027/78). See The Musical Settings of Kipling's Verse. It is collected in Limits and Renewals (1932) where it precedes “Beauty Spots”, in the Sussex Edition, Volume 11 page 277, and Volume 34, page 421. Also collected in Inclusive Verse, Definitive Verse and The Works of Rudyard Kipling (Wordsworth Poerty Library).
See also KJ 021/06 and 027/75.
[Verse 1] The Splendour of Morning Kipling was particularly inspired by this time of day – see “The Dawn Wind” and Something of Myself, page 53 line 20: 'I would wander until dawn in all manner of odd places—liquor-shops, gambling and opium dens ...'
[Verse 2] his innards Kipling suffered from gastric trouble for many years.
First published in Limits and Renewals (1932) where it follows “Beauty Spots”, collected in the Sussex Edition Volume 11 page 305, and Volume 34, page 422. Also collected in Inclusive Verse, Definitive Verse and The Works of Rudyard Kipling (Wordsworth Poerty Library).
Dr. Tompkins (page 142, passim) discusses this verse – see the Headnote.
[Verse 1] To second life returns back to civilian life after the 1914 War. See “The Clerks and the Bells” and “The Scholars” for more verses on a similar theme; also “The Woman in His Life” earlier in this volume and “A Friend of the Family", “In the Interests of the Brethren” and other stories of returning soldiers in Debits and Credits.
[Verse 4] Springs his mine in this context, detonates buried explosives beneath an enemy position.
[G.S. / J. H. McG.]
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